After revisiting a memory of Baby
Suggs’s dance rituals, Sethe recollects the lectures her mother-in-law
delivered to the former slaves visiting 124. Baby Suggs’s tactics as an orator
reveal her ability to relate to and impact crowds of African-Americans. Suggs
calls to “we flesh; flesh that weeps, laughs; flesh that dances on bare feet in
grass” (103). The word choice in “we flesh” signifies a bond stronger than that
of a group of individuals, but rather one fused in an indivisible way, with
relation of the community to a body. It is also important to note that with the
use of “flesh” in this case, she also addresses the one difference that unifies
them all, their unique skin. She then challenges them to “love it. Love it
hard” (103). Her imperatives function to show how she assertively provides those
in 124 with direction that without her isn’t there and is needed for those
freed from slavery looking for assistance in starting over. This direction is
apparent when we find Sethe desiring the guidance of Baby Suggs. She warns them
“yonder they do not love your flesh. They despise it. They don’t love your eyes;
they’d just as soon pick em out” (103). The word “yonder” is vital in its
provision of physical separation of white people and themselves to add to the
separation she creates ideologically in showing the distasteful ways whites
view them. The ideological separation is largely created with the use of
antithesis when she emphasizes the extent of hatred by comparing the opposite
and exaggerated sides of emotions between the two. These comparisons are built
off the repetition of the phrases “they do” and “they do not,” which also attest
to her communication skills as they produce a harmonious pattern.
I think you did a great job to set up the background context behind your analysis, but I also think you could embed your first quote better. Add to "Suggs calls to." Your analysis that the flesh implies a greater bond between them is not a reach, and I think it is accurate. I'm not entirely sure what you mean when you say that the word "yonder" is crucial to the meaning of the "physical separation" and you need to be more clear in this analysis. However, your analysis on the antithesis is really good and it shows full understanding of the quote.
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