Drew Dischmann
AP Lang/Comp
25 March 2013
In
Beloved the descriptive nature in
which Toni Morrison describes her characters is an essential and intricate part
of this puzzling novel. On the banks of a river near 124, a new character,
Beloved, is introduced in the novel. Morrison harps on Beloved’s mental and
physical condition as a way in which Beloved can be further introduced to both
other characters such as Sethe and Denver but also to form the spiritual aspect
of Beloveds character. After drinking numerous cups of water and answering a
few questions, Beloved dozes off “in the middle of Sethe’s welcome”(64). Once
Paul D, Denver, and Sethe realize she must need more rest Beloved “opened her
eyes to slits”(64”). Upon struggling to walk on her “soft, new feet” she
eventually makes it Baby Sugg’s bed where she “collapsed”(64). This description
offers insight into the development of one of Morrison’s complex characters.
Beloved is also drastically tired and worn out as she can only open her eyes to
“slits” but through Morrison’s imagery and intricate adjectives Beloved is also
relatively work-free as she has “soft, new feet” – unlike all of those living
in 124. Morrison also shows the overwhelmed and physically incapable side to
Beloved as instead of simply lying down or lounging into bed, Beloved
“collapsed” showing her unstable and truly worn-out mental state contrasted by
a seemingly facile physically state as shown in her perfect skin and un-worked
hands and feet. Through description Morrison is ultimately able to develop her
characters into more complex and unique characters in her novel, Beloved.
Check if your topic sentence is debatable. Also, consider Beloved possessing baby-like features. For example: soft hands and feet, no neck support, sleeping all the time. Focus more on imagery/language associated with an infant. Also consider when Sethe returns from the carnival, and has to urinate all of a sudden (when Beloved first shows up). Sethe recalls when her water broke, before Denver was born, and feels like she is undergoing the same process. Beloved is also wet, weak, and barely conscious-like a newborn baby.
ReplyDeleteThanks Spencer! These are some good points
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