Sarah Birkett
P.3
AP Lang & Comp
3-26-13
In
Beloved, Morrison uses the images of
shadows and similes to show the changing tensions between Sethe, Paul D,
Denver, and the new girl: Beloved.
When the three return from their day at the carnival, they discover a
woman who is clearly sick and embodies every characteristic of an infant from
her skin to her hair. Although this girl is a stranger, very soon into her
stay, “Sethe was licked, tasted, and eaten by Beloved’s eyes” (68). The
curiosity that Beloved has for Sethe is described as an appetite for her
stories. Beloved feeds of off what Sethe has to offer her in her stories about
her past, regardless of how dark they may have been. Morrison goes on to say
that “[Beloved] hovered,” (68) which gives her more of childlike connotation
because children are often noted to be hovering around their interests. As
Beloved hovered around Sethe, “their two shadows clashed and crossed on the ceiling
like black swords” (68). The images of shadows exemplify the idea that both
Sethe and Beloved have their own inner demons that are starting to fight back
against one another. The fact that the shadows “clashed and crossed” implies
that the two shadows are not meeting peacefully but instead are combating. The
idea of combating is further by the simile “like black swords.” The color black
has a negative connotation by itself but the fact that the shadows are
described as swords makes their connotation seem even darker and sharper. Morrison’s
use of these images and similes makes the tensions between the three family
members and the new member Beloved clearer and also displays the idea the Sethe
and Beloved may contain their own clashing inner demons.
I think you have a great analysis but I would start with context so the audience understands what your is topic before you dive into the topic sentence. Make sure that you are aware of taboo words such as "very" and maybe read it through one more time. I think your analysis takes in a wide variety of quotes and you could narrow your focus. Overall, I think you have a good analysis! :)
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